Wednesday, January 14, 2009

Shh~



entwined in the heat of passion
he whispers,
"I Love You"

their trysts,
forever forfeited
by three little damaging words


For 3WW
Photo courtesy of Deviant Art

12 comments:

ThomG said...

Nicely crafted. Somewhat sad, I would suppose, but real, too.

Genie Sea said...

Ouchie! Love it :)

Fledgling Poet said...

That says it all...many people can't handle the heaviness of those three words!

quin browne said...

i've always said, people fear the word love as much as they do cancer...

angie said...

Haha...very clever!

Fledgling Poet said...

Rebecca, thanks for the kind words about my 3WW post...I wanted to let you know that the picture is not photoshopped, and I've now added a link to the real life story about the monkey and the pigeon. It's incredibly heartwarming to read! Thanks again~~ :~)

missalister said...

Oh, ow. It may be short, but sweet? Maybe bitterly, but more like poignant à la total proficiency : )

Caroline said...

That is intense...

CoyoteFe said...

Sparse and painful? Deadly combination. You rock! Love the new blog-skin.

Donn Coppens said...

I presume that he was unaware of the term Friends With Benefits.

Apparently this younger generation has been traumatized by the prevelance of divorce and innundated with a new model of managing relationships.

I would like to mention that there is a global conference being held in my city on Polar Bears..you expressed some concern at my seemingly cavalier attitude towards them...but I love Polar Bears and they are quickly replacing the Panda as the symbol of ecological disaster.

I would add that I love them as long as they don't eat me.

rebecca said...

halloo donn!!!

Listen, regarding the polar bears, I am not concerned at all. I was just playing with you. I love animals, that's no secret, but some can be quite dangerous. But, dangerous or not, I still feel for them because of the global warming but that doesn't mean I am one of those people who you have to tiptoe around- it's all good, donn! All good. :)

OneMoreBeliever said...

no strings attached.... no commitment... no, don't think so... like sharing spit... tho sometimes those 3 words are used like mayo on a BLT whitebread sandwich