Thursday, September 30, 2010

Envenomed

For Flash Friday 55

driving to the DMV this morn’
'neath the pitter-patter of angry raindrops
saw a black sedan –
limo, that is
speeding towards,
unconstrained.

as it passed
seen the knackered, choleric face
of a scruffy, old man
in a dirty cap,
in a wrinkled suit,
spewing vitriol
to his motored carriage
that had also seen better days.



11 comments:

Brian Miller said...

so they go well together eh? smiles. intriguing pic...it does look rather vintage

Writers Own said...

I feel like I travelled back in time with this one. The old man driving past with Bassie Smith playing near by...

You have a way with words that I like, I'm definitely following from here on, take care.

Writers Own said...

I feel like I travelled back in time with this one. The old man driving past and Bessie Smith playing in the background somewhere...

You have a style of writing I enjoy, I pop in once in a while but I think I'll be following from here on, take care.

Judie said...

These little bits of your life are painting a picture for me. MORE!!

Wine and Words said...

There were a lot of delicious words in here! Gnaw on words! Full mouth words! I want to read it out loud. I'm gonna....

:)

Everyday Goddess said...

eek, sounds like they were a perfect match.

and i thought it was only dog owners who resemble their dogs.

Hannah Kincade said...

Oh this is one my favorite songs! I love your short.

Have a great weekend!

PattiKen said...

Great couple, both remembering the days when they were all the rage.

Monkey Man said...

What a photo! Love the way you put this together.

moondustwriter said...

Like something from an old movie or a creepy movie

what a great 55

have a great wkend

Moon smiles

Olivia said...

What a unique way of writing,, :D
Great weekend